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Renegade Orion ➼ [Reading] ➾ Renegade Orion By Delores Diamond ➱ – Buyprobolan50.co.uk My personal fairy tale had almost come true I bought my Mercantile House I had a title, power, servants and unimaginable wealth The only things lacking were a fated mate, a Prince Charming if you will My personal fairy tale had almost come true I bought my Mercantile House I had a title, power, servants and unimaginable wealth The only things lacking were a fated mate, a Prince Charming if you willBut life on Kartak is hardly like a storybookAs I embarked on a dangerous mission to uncover an ancient technology, I began to look for my mate as well Little did I know, I d fall into the hands of my worst enemy, and his savage skinner forces that only wish me harmMy only hope for survival is to trust a Tulani mercenary, a brawny alien with a short temper and the fire of lust in his eyes One touch, and he consumes me I m worried we ll both burn aliveI want to believe he is my fated mate But will this brutal alien keep me safe, or betray me to my enemy My life is in the hands of my own personal RenegadeRenegade Orion is a standalone romance novel set in the Shifter Kings of Kartak universe No cliffhangers and a sexy happy ending guaranteed.


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10 thoughts on “Renegade Orion

  1. Ashleyjo Ashleyjo says:

    image error I d like to preface with a noteDear authors seeking beta readers, Don t waste my time if you don t actually want beta readers to help you better your booksYou re Only A First Time Author Once Since book one was a FIRST BOOK by this SELF PUB author and only had a handful of reviews, I was very givingon the technicalities That s a one time only pass Writing Supposedly, this book was edited by a professional editor So, what happened to it image error Grammatical error image error I d like to preface with a noteDear authors seeking beta readers, Don t waste my time if you don t actually want beta readers to help you better your booksYou re Only A First Time Author Once Since book one was a FIRST BOOK by this SELF PUB author and only had a handful of reviews, I was very givingon the technicalities That s a one time only pass Writing Supposedly, this book was edited by a professional editor So, what happened to it image error Grammatical errors plague EVERY page but Orion s hand is chocking him A moment later, Maya is by my side , unbuckling me from my seat I know there s no chance he s seen that flik , but I can tell he s I had allowed those humans brave enough to face the dangers of Kartak free passage , in hopes that the Tulani. His legs are thick as stone columns , and covered in tight scaled leather Maybe when we re done , our boss will let you play house with your little princess Astrid sits beside her , grinning at me , as if she knows some amusing secret There have always been rumors of other devices, but none has ever been found Every page is like this Inconsistent phrasing throughout Sometimes the author uses contractions don t and sometimes she writes it out do not The writing is partly a stiff, robotic voice and partly casual friendly It s an unhealthy combination that wrecks havoc on readability.Even errors aren t consistent Of the 13 times the author uses marine s , half are capitalized and half aren t Phrasing is awkward I push my way through the crowd, and it parts easily before me, and Gemini follows in my wake A final squeeze, and I hear bones breaking in his neck, and his body goes limp Again, readability is stifled as the reader is unnecessarily paused by poor phrases set off in commas Threads are rushed Every single plot thread is rushed The arc is flat as a pancake vs 1 intro 2 build 3 climax 4 resolve Edited my ass The Plot Is A Discombobulated Mess The book opens with Rhea arriving back to alien town to visit her friend, trade, and hunt an apotheosis chamber Two years of unwritten book have passed for the reader THESE ARE SUPPOSED TO BE STANDALONE BOOKS WITHIN A SERIES If I hadn t read book one, I d have serious problems understanding and following a lot of the plot threads Just from the opening chapters, I d be wonderingWhat is an apotheosis chamber How does it work Why is it important to Rhea Who are Astrid and Rhea to each other Why has it been two years since they ve seen each other Who the fuck are these people she s talking about assigning her an heir and why would that heir assassinate her Etc etcPlus, even as a returning reader, I have very little to substantiate my answers to the above.I have a ton of questions related to the gap between book one and two Namely, how hell Rhea went from a rescued communications officer in book one to a princess sky captain who controls travel to an alien planet and has a fleet of ships at her disposal in book two By laws of the Mercantile Empire, it was within my Rhea rights to control the travels of any humans to Kartak Princess Rhea Tarkon No Moving on then. Enter the alien MMC, Orion, and his friend They claim to know a chamber s location Off Rhea goes with them Oops Orion is a double agent, possible triple agent, sent to bring Rhea to Kole And, here we are again at an impasse for new and previous readers alike New readers don t know Kole and are asking themselvesWho the fuck is Kole Why does he hate Rhea Rescue What Rescue What Empire What the hell is the RecluseSimply telling new readers the rescue party couldn t find his ass and he now blames her doesn t cut it for new readers For returning readers, simply skipping how Kole went from MIA to being the leader of some Void Seeker followers on an alien planet doesn t cut it Slow Down And Tell Me WTF Is Happening So, Kole has a kidnapped Rhea He tells her she is going to trial and it will be broadcast to the Empire Trial starts How do you plead Kole demandsWhat s she charged with By whom Who decides her innocence or guilt Etc etc etcI plead not guilty And I choose trial by combat Maybe, I ll at least find out why this new leader of some hostile aliens feels the need to air this shit show to the Empire he feels abandoned him He s doing this because he understands the law The law isn t going to protect a commoner raised to nobility The law is written to keep us down Nope That did not answer my question as to WHY he d give a rat s ass about airing this to the Empire Let s try again If he breaks the rules, he loses all legitimacy in their the Empire eyes I understand so clearly now Moving on Ah, The Romance No fear Orion is going to save Rhea from Kole, or will he Orion at 29% I don t want to have to kill her Rhea Orion ONE page later She Rhea has awakened emotions in me that have long remained dormant I can t stand the thought of being away from her forthan a few hours Annnnnd, a couple pages later He s talking about wanting to rip apart a prison and claim her as his mate From killing her being an option to the endearment of one s fated mate in 1.2 seconds It All Can t Be Nonsense So, Let s Play Leap FrogAGAIN We ve already established you will not know what has happened to Rhea and Kole the two years between books, so why should I expect any different on Rhea s time in the Void from book one I don t know I guess I m stupid like that for wanting a complete story She Rhea too has spent time imprisoned in the Void and I remember how much it troubled her when I reminded her of it Thoughtful of the author to include this tidbit to remind us that in two books we ve yet to hear a single detail r t what happened to Rhea as she spent 90% of book one in the Void Characters OrionBlue Alien 8 ridge cock that gets hard for Rhea Can t shape shift Did I mention he sucks ass at being a fated mate I won t leave your side Four pages later I sprint after him, no longer hearing the voice of my fated mate calling out to me All my thoughts consumed by my desire for glorious revenge And, off he flies hanging off a ship while his fated mate is left unprotected IN BATTLE The result Only she three from her side survive the battle Surprise The dumbfuck MMC wakes in a prison cell wondering how he could leave his mate unprotected Memo for alpha male authors This is a wiener This is a winner Rhea She saysshe wants to be saved, protected, and coddled storybook style by her fated mate What she really means, though, is she s thirsty for her very own huge purple eggplant dick to do with as she pleases She seems to have a preoccupation with outdoing her friend,Astrid I feel NOTHING but lust coming off her for her fated mate Romance Where As a character, she alternates between an unsure damsel, cocksure sky captain princess, and nerdy geek It s like spin the wheel on the scene to know which one ya get She all but takes Orion s dick as a pogo stick for their first sexual encounter Second time she says, I let him take charge. She tells him he needs to go see the witch She marks him She tells orders him to go help her men fight She has Orion so pussywhipped after just 24 hours that he even stops in battle to let her decide who lives and dies.Some chick needs rescuing Rhea makes plans Rhea makes promises Orion gets a nod for effort When Orion jumps on the ship seeking revenge, she cries for hours and ponders Why would he leave me He promised he would never leave my side Is revenge so important to him Did he feel like he has to prove himself to me Is this all my fault No fear It s cocksure Rhea to the rescue She rides in on her ship to save him, immediately forgive him,claim him as herfuture husband, and level the whole goddamn combat zone with orbital bombardment Someone needs capturing I will be the one to capture him, with Orion by my side I think this best sums up Orion and Rhea s relationship How did you know to carry me out of the chapel I don t remember telling you to do that Do aliens have three balls If so, I might ve just found Orion s hiding in the corner of my Wizard of Oz book Beta, Beta, Beta, Here, Beta, Beta, Beta view spoiler The author gave me the first seven chapters of this book to beta That sof an alpha reader, but okay, whatever I read and made suggestions and notes that mirrored the problems I outlined in my review I ve heard nothing the last week from the author So, imagine my surprise to find book two PUBLISHED yesterday It s rude, bad ethics, and poor judgement for this author to leave someone hanging who took their time and knowledge to help HER The author didn t even tell me she had finished writing, editing, and publishing all within A WEEK And, it shows in the quality of the book None, right down to me highlighting chocking as misspelled, of my beta notes were utilized My review of the book itself was not impacted by the beta experience I reviewed the content for what it was without any prejudice hide spoiler I appreciate the author contacting me to apologize for the beta reading fiasco Life happens and balls sometimes get dropped in the fray Brings back Be The BALL coaching memories from my days as b ball player lol Anyway, I ve put it in a spoiler because actions do matter, but they can most certainly be forgiven I stand by my review, but I will gladly reread review this if the author so chooses to rework it Bottom Line This book reads like output, not quality, was the target The characters and plot alternate between being undeveloped, skipped over, and or nonsensical The technical errors are abundant The two main draw of book one were 1 the interesting, unique world and 2 the swoon worthy alpha male Both qualities are absent in book two 1 generous star


  2. Shasha Shasha says:

    I was expecting improvement after the first book but I can t say I liked this addition Much of this story depends on information from book 1 Even after reading it, this story was confusing by its lack of details The characters just knew things that I didn t know as the reader and things happened that left me withquestions And the typosIf you want a light adult read with instalust and a happy ending without using your brain, this will pass the time.


  3. namericanwordcat namericanwordcat says:

    This is a fun next book in the series with a great hero I love a smart heroine and we get one here The world building is good The plot rolls forward nicely but there are moments that make little sense, however, the romance makes up for the faltering.


  4. Laura Nelson (Tangents and Tissues) Laura Nelson (Tangents and Tissues) says:

    Renegade Orion is the second in a new Sci fi Alien Shifter romance series by Delores Diamond and she has really stepped up her game with this installment In my opinion to fully appreciate this story, it is best to have read Renegade Leo first.Now the head of her own prosperous House with exclusive trading rights with Kartak, thanks in no small part to her bestie Astrid s union with the head of the Tulani Clan, Leo Rhea has everything she ever dreamed off Well, almost everything What she woul Renegade Orion is the second in a new Sci fi Alien Shifter romance series by Delores Diamond and she has really stepped up her game with this installment In my opinion to fully appreciate this story, it is best to have read Renegade Leo first.Now the head of her own prosperous House with exclusive trading rights with Kartak, thanks in no small part to her bestie Astrid s union with the head of the Tulani Clan, Leo Rhea has everything she ever dreamed off Well, almost everything What she wouldn t give to find her own fated mate and somehow find the capability to have a child of her own.Orion is one conflicted man alien you know what I mean Having left the Clan years earlier, he makes a living as a mercenary for the highest bidder Only this latest assignment may be the hardest yet.Lured by the prospect of uncovering some very sought after ancient technology, Rhea sets off on an expedition on Kartak which puts her very life in jeopardy As old ghosts return to haunt her, will Orion turn out to be friend or foe Holy shizzballs What a high octane ride It s chock full of action coughs I never said a word , intrigue, suspense and a healthy dose of smexy romance I seem to have developed a soft spot for blue sexy shapeshifting aliens with some interesting skill sets All the techy sci fi bits also appeal to my inner geek.The author s writing has just gone from strength to strength and I highly recommend you try out this entertaining world she has created and the colourful characters that inhabit it


  5. Karen Karen says:

    This is a fantastic addition to the Kartak series and a book I highly recommend for sci fi romance lovers I liked it even better than book one, which set the stage for the series This book begins two years after book one ends and to fully appreciate this book I recommend reading book one first In book one, an approaching spaceship is attacked by the planet Kartak s defense system Rhea, the ship s badly injured comms specialist is placed in an escape pod and crashes on the planet s surface S This is a fantastic addition to the Kartak series and a book I highly recommend for sci fi romance lovers I liked it even better than book one, which set the stage for the series This book begins two years after book one ends and to fully appreciate this book I recommend reading book one first In book one, an approaching spaceship is attacked by the planet Kartak s defense system Rhea, the ship s badly injured comms specialist is placed in an escape pod and crashes on the planet s surface She is captured and later rescued Her dream has always been to become a Mercantile Princess with her own ship and she now has her chance This book tells the story of her return to Kartak as the Mercantile Princess Rhea Tarkon, ready to barter with the locals for goods to sell A Tulani renegade, Orion, and his associate approach her with claims of knowing the whereabouts of a second healing chamber like that introduced in book one They reach agreement, but a shadow assassin immediately makes an attempt on Rhea s life and Orion successfully defends her This turns out to be a foreshadowing of the deadly trials to come, including an encounter with the Blind Witch, the prophet Orion has avoided since he came of age A copy was received in return for an honest review


  6. Melissa Melissa says:

    I received a copy in return for an honest review Oh to see these big blue guys again This is Delores Diamond s second book and I found it to be even better than the first We first caught a brief glimpse in the first book of Rhea, now it s 2 years on and we find her returning to Kartak Enter Orion, though he seems to have some nefarious purpose, it turns out he s her blue knight in shining armour However to find outyou ll just have to read the story I strongly recommend reading book I received a copy in return for an honest review Oh to see these big blue guys again This is Delores Diamond s second book and I found it to be even better than the first We first caught a brief glimpse in the first book of Rhea, now it s 2 years on and we find her returning to Kartak Enter Orion, though he seems to have some nefarious purpose, it turns out he s her blue knight in shining armour However to find outyou ll just have to read the story I strongly recommend reading book 1 Leo before this one, even though it can be read as a stand alone If you enjoy syfy romance than this is a great read


  7. Miranda Whore Miranda Whore says:

    FateI am truly enjoying this series It isn t what I originally expected, but I find myself hooked I don t want to go into details since this is such a short bookI will say it s better than the first I fell I love with the characters from the start and did a couple mental fist pumps as I read Four stars and three wet panties.Review by Miranda at Mommy s a Book Whore.


  8. Lorrie Moar Lorrie Moar says:

    This copy was given to me for an honest review and here it isLove this alien shifter human romance Orion and Rhea are two awesome characters that I loved getting to know With treachery, drama, fighting, kidnapping and very hot, very sexy romance this is a great scifi to get lost in I can t wait to read the next part of this series, just wondering what the next shifter is gonna be, lol.


  9. Puna Puna says:

    The first book in this series had a horrible female lead but was redeemed, to an extent, by a darn good male leadthis book doesn t have anything to save it.


  10. An_na An_na says:

    read 3chapters


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